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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17424
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次较为清晰。

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From the graph, we can see that the rate of family expense in the USA has increased during the year of 2002-2005. Food and Drink of 2005 showed an increasing trend. Which gone up from 18 to 22. Medical rose 2 percentages too. Housing has undergone dramatically increased from 25 to 32.Therefore, it’s obvious that expense in the USA was increasing. There are several reasons for the rising. First, the global financial crisis was sweeping during that time. As a result, the prices of food and drink became higher than 2000. Second, as USA is stepping into aging of population. So more medical measures are needed for people. Finally, influenced by developing countries those housing is always a problem. Housing was increasing quickly. From the above discussions, we have enough reason to believe what had happened in the next few years. The trend described in the graphic has been continuing for quite a long time till now. It's really a problem to decline.

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