2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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While shopping online has been a hot wave in this modern time,it means fashionable and more.Everything has two coins,it would be something good for us,but also be something wrong.In my opinion,making balance in this part is more important.On the one hand,shopping online gives us more convenient and saving more times to walk outside,we just move our fingers that we could get goods until the door bells,on the other hand,we should worry about our financial securities in the internet,specially sitting all the day in from of the computer which can make weakness to us.All in all ,shopping online may to keep on mind.