小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. he is a cool boy.he has short black hair,two big eyes and a big mouth. his speaking is better. he is good at playing baskeball. he is a good boy. he likes watching TV ,playing computer games and chess.Sometime,he helps us or our classmates.so,we like his very much.