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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3528
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用学术词汇;采用了一些简单的从句;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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There is no question of getting a degree not to consider what your age. I must agree with a former because each one should learn till old enough. The spirits of chasing academic degree will enlarge view of how to see life . The first reason I will back points is that older should learn as the younger do, as the development of technology and social steps fastly , each one could not promise steadly that what he or she have learned knowledge is not backward in a long time. So everyone should study whatever he or she is age. Modern knowledge is changing with the step of social change. If someone does not follow the wave of modern , he or she will lose his target of life. conversely , if you keep your mind on new step of society and technology and embrace the spirits of continuous learning ,you will have smart mind and improve significantly your adaptibility capacity. When you are old and old enough, but you have to communicate with younger through EMAIL、TEXT、NEW 、MEDIA、 IPAD、 MSN and so on. Those new communicate tool do not be used suddenly if you can not keep your mind to master using skill. So communication capacity of making friends with younger 、specially、with your son or offspring is resource of your happiness of life. In the end of paragraph, I will underline my view of aging should learn without thinking of. this attitude is a spirits of worth chase and keeping interest life. And older man or women could keep in touch with younger and build better relationship, get better happiness life.

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