小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。

Hebe is my good friend. she is a very pretty girl,and she likes laughing very much. she is 3 months. Her mother is my wife,and I am her father. we are a happy family. Everyday we are living happily . Hebe is the gift,which god give us,and I and my wife are very happy. I really love my daughter very much.