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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:998
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

There is a hot topic about the necessary if lies recently. It is widely acceptable that we should be honest to others. However, everyone may lie to others inevitably for various reasons. Lying is not an uncommon phenomenon. The key is why we lie to others. For example, we may lie when we want to protect somebody from being hurt. This is a kind thing. On the contrary, if we lie to others because of the drive to power or other selfish aim. It is foolish and harmful to our interpersonal relationship. In conclude, I hold the view that the lies are necessary in our life, but we should lie in right way and right occasion.

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