拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者在句法层面做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Since we have joined in the World Trade Organisation,the English is become more important than before.Especially the Olympic games in 2008 in Beijing,putting the learning English to a high level,all of the population are joined in the learning English in China.But this phenomenon is not so well,especially our culture,and the mother language Chinese. Not just above those reasons,and there are so many reasons let this phenomenon happen.First,because we want to go abroad;second,learning some new languages are good for us to obtain a good job;and third,because all of the world's population is learning other languages,not just English.This phenomenon lead to some bad consequence,like don't care our cultural,all abandon of our own language.It is bad for a country to development in the future,and the new kids will don't know our cultural,but just know other country's.That is horrible. In my opinion,I think that learning other languages are not wrong,but we should know what is the most important thing for us.Our own language and culture are the first thing in our mind,because we inherit them from our ancestor,they are treasures for us,we should take care of them,and to learn them by heart.