2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,we are in information ages,so the computer is indispensable to our life.Especially for younger,they nearly cannot live without it. Computer have changed the world,which improved the development of our society as well as the progress of technoly.It fast the tempol of our life.We use it to watch the vedio,listen to music,buy something online,keep in touch with our friends and so on.