2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,we are in information ages,so the computer is indispensable to our life.Especially for youngers,they almost cannot live without it. Computer have changed the world,which improved the development of our society as well as the progress of technology.It fasts the tempo of our life.We use it to watch the vedio,listen to music,shopping,keep in touch with our friends and so on.