2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

In our daily life ,online shopping has become more and more popular with people.It is sympol of fashion. Online shopping has some advantages.Such as ,it can save our time and our money.And the price of some online clothes ,food and other thingsis unexpensive.Their types is more much than the actual shops.But online shopping also has many shortcomings.some online things is different from its acual suitation.for this ,you will feel unsatisfied.Even more ,you may be cheated by some dishonsety seller. As far as I'm concered,we should more and more carefully when we go online shopping.when we purchase some goods,we should think over secondlyand acknowledge the real suitation of goods from the commitment of other customers. when we submit the order form to seller,we have to check it carefully.In a word,online shopping is a double-edged sword.we could try our best to make it serve us very well.