2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

In our daily life ,online shopping has become more and more popular with people.It is symbol of fashion. Online shopping has some advantages.Such as ,it can save our time and our money.And the price of some online clothes ,food and other things is unexpensive.Their types are more than the actual shops.But online shopping also has many shortcomings.some online things is different from its actual suitation.For this ,you will feel unsatisfied.Even more ,you may be cheated by some dishonsety seller. As far as I'm concered,we should more and more carefully when we go online shopping.when we purchase some goods,we should think over secondly and acknowledge the real suitation of goods from the commitment of other customers. When we submit the order form,we have to check it carefully.In a word,online shopping is a double-edged sword.We could try our best to make it serve us very well.