2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Now more and more people like to buy something online.if you will find goods are cheaper than shopping in the market.and more nice than others goods in some places.so many people think that shopping on the line is a fashion. But every things have two sides.Of course shopping online have same questions and same things good to people.For example,some people find that the goods are bad when they buy some things. As soon as they receive these products are out of commission they con’t exchange these products.then they will be complain that shopping online is a wrong way. It is bad to people.The others like to shopping online that they think bring much happy to them.As they careful shopping in the internet,so they get more happy from the shopping online. In the end,we belive our science but you have to use the science carefully.we created our beautiful life and we have to find our shortcomings to eachange them .I think shopping online will be more safe.