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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Now more and more people like to buy things online, where you will find goods are cheaper than those in the market. And they are also more nice than others in some places. So many people think that shopping on the line is a fashionable way. But every coin has two sides. Of course, shopping online is good to people. For example, some people find that the goods are bad when they have got the things. As soon as they receive the products are out of commission they can not exchange these products. After that they will complain that shopping online is a wrong way. It is bad to people. The others like to shopping online because they think it brings much more happiness to them. As they are carefully shopping in the internet, so they get more happy from the shopping online. In the end, we believe our science but you have to use it carefully and properly. We create our beautiful life while we also need to find our shortcomings to correct them .Only in this way can we live a more happy and safe life.
