- 分享到:
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Personally speaking, as a student, we must save money in all kinds of method. A rich must be a man who know how to save money. Saving money is the first step to be a rich person. Making money is important, but saving money can tell us how to use money more valuable. First of all, we are student, we have not work, yet. The money is from our parents. We should know that to earn some money our parents must work hard. It is not as much easy as we think. So we shouldn't waist money. Second, when we save money, we choosing to collect coupons and looking for group-buy deals. I think it is the best way to use money, we not only can enjoy ourselves, but also we can save much of money. As a conclusion, i strongly approve that students should save money, and we should learn the method to use less money, and get more happiness.
