2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；连词使用偏少。

In the contemporary society,computer as an indispensable tool has be used in many places to help people finish their work well and make their lives abundant.And the phenomenon that many people can not leave their computer has become a social problem. In these years,computer has be used in many field，it can help people make their work be easy.In the life,it become an versatile facilities for a family,it can become an communications in person's life.But it also bring some questions.One of them is that there are more and more people rely on computer,it made their personal strength decline and people do not think gradually.The anther one,is computer made communication easily and people can stay at home.But it made people always stay in the house and have less sport. Computer was a tool for people,but now it gradually control people's life.Many people can not have no computer in their life.It is an unhealthy appearance.