高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown have changed a lot. In the past, my hometown surouded by green trees. The fish playing in the water.And the house was simple ,the street was narrow. People's life was .now ,the tall building is appears everywhere,the cars too.The development of the industry is becoming bad,trees and fish is increasing .