GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；词汇稍欠丰富，且拼写错误比较多；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨。

The Importance of Science and Art The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.” With the development of the society, we kown the function of the science is very impotant.For exmple, we can prepare many things according to the what we need.We can cure ouselves when we catch a cold; We can make many things.So many scientist think the function of the science is to reassure. As we all know the art need one's creation, for example,when we draw pictures ,we need to think about many things,and creat a lot of things.Music is also makes us happy and sad.It affected us. Of cause there in lies the value of each.Science is reasonalbe,we can try to explain everything according to the sciece.Because it has logic things,and it is according to the fact.However,art is creative, if the artist is objective.There is no happpy or sad music, there is only bore life left. So, as for me ,The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”