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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:45522
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

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It can be seen from the chart that there have been dramatic changes in different degrees.The number was $451 of less than hign school diploma which it went up sharply to $1551 of doctoral degree. What are the reasons for the trend? they could be discussed in the following two aspects. One of the major factors is companys are interested in high degrees of people. Secondly,it is also because more people have no much more money to get high degrees.therefore, different degree has different pays. From my perspective, education pays will bring on some worries. If people spend to much time on money,we will not happy.The other word,we should study hard so that we can make more money in the future.

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