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Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
字数：300 满分：100分
熟练使用了一些长难句；全文结构较为严谨；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。
Marks will be awarded for content, organization,language and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may resuit in a loss of marks. Nowsday we live in era of high price,most of things need cost us large amount of money.So in my opinion,we collect all kinds of coupons,look for group-buy deals and so on is a way to save our money. In the unit,our salary are so low and don't raise with the prise of the commodities,so we have to spend our money moderately.In the home, we need to pay various bills,such as electric charge,water-rate,gas fee,property fee,garbage fees.Besides we also have to pay some fees come from our children.And we need to buy a house by-ourselves,we can't live in our parents's home all the time and when our children grown-up their have to get married.And if we live far away from our units we have to buy a ,all those should be paid by us. To sum up,we need to spend our money moderatly,so it is necessy to look for group-buy deals and don't buy colthes unless in a sale.
