小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

My happy family I‘m 27 years old,is not small,though I'm poor,nor talent,but I feel very lucky.Because my wife is my pride. She is very beautiful,very thoughtful,of course we also love each other.We got married in 2011,and the birth of the first child,a lovely and pretty daughter.Now she was almost 2 years old,we all love her very much.Because of our work,the baby and my parents together,we often call her,she also shouted "Dad,mom". My wife and I also work in different places,she is an account and I engaged in circuit design.Sometimes,we will also make some unpleasant,but soon,we will be friends again,because she is very fierce,I'm afraid it when he's angry.So I decide,I will not make her angry anymore.I believe ,we will be better tomorrow.