2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；简单句有点多，注意部分句子错误；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

somebody is able to accomplish something what their has a strong will .somebody successful with has a strong will . Dream what you want to dream go what you want to go be what you want you be . as a students .i want to become success people what try and try to study