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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第38篇: 学生学习历史和文学是否比学习科学和数学更重要

发布时间:2013-08-16 16:48浏览次数:4083
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.

Use specific reasons to support your opinion.

学生学习历史和文学是否比学习科学和数学更重要。你的观点是?并给出原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

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用户练习作文:

As we know, there are many subjects that we can choose at university. It includes history, literature, science, mathematics and other professional subjects. In my opinion, we should not tell which one is much more important than any other. Here are some reasons. The one reason for that we should not compare history and literature between science and mathematics is insignificant. The subjects can be dived into two branches. One is liberal arts, and the other one is sciences. History and literature belong to the former, and science and mathematics belong to the latter. The other reason is that history and literature help students to make better expression, and science and mathematics make students think more logically. Thus, we should not compare these subjects each other. We should master our professional subject, and then learn other subject.

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