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1999年专四作文真题:电视广告的优缺点

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:11浏览次数:7891
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Direction:We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits, but others don’t think so. What is your opinion? A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television
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A Major Disadvantage of Advertising on Television We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think it is of great benefit, while others do not think so.I do agree with the latter. We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think it is of great benefit, while others do not think so.I do agree with the latter. We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think it is of great benefit, while others do not think so.I do agree with the latter.

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