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A Major Disadvantage of Advertising on Television We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think it is of great benefit, while others do not think so.I do agree with the latter. We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think it is of great benefit, while others do not think so.I do agree with the latter. We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think it is of great benefit, while others do not think so.I do agree with the latter.