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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17434
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章层次较为清晰;能够使用一些简单的从句;请注意分段。

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In the high-tech social, computer, has become the most important implement for us. So at there, I want to give some example of what the influence of the compter to us. First of all, I want to you think of this, you went to university and it was far from home, so when you miss your parents, you can open your computer and say hello with your parents face to face,which was so convenient.And then, when you feel tired, you just can play some computer games and throw pressure away.But I think the most influence of the computer is change our way of life, we can know the latest news around the world,and we can make money from it,and .....and so on So anyway ,you could never doubt that computer and man will never depart.The computer have become one part of our life.

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