2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays, many parents do all the things for their children. For example, they wash clothes, clean rooms, cook meals, even do homework. It is such a strange phenomenon and,generally speaking, it comes down to the following two: On the one hand, most families have only one child at present, as a consequence, the child is spoiled and cared detailedly.On the other hand, children lose the abilities of taking care of themselves generally because of parents' considered care. In my opinion, in order to let children become independent, which benefits children in the long term, parents should try to let children make their own decisions and go over difficulties by themselves. Meanwhile, allowing them more freedom can make children more confident and encourage them stop relying on others.