托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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There is a debat about participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something. Without any thinking of in a minit, i am going to disagree this view of target of participating in sports. The following reasons could interpret my view. Firestly,to take part in all kinds of sports is not to achieve some ranks or rewards in the end. Conversily, receiveing some rewards is just one of the possibilities, the most important target is to tansmitting sports spirits crossing the world, enhancing the relationship with different peoples, which is keep the line in some problems during the development of different countries or nations such as environmental problems and resource reused ect. The sencond reason i couldnot keep the same view with the speaker is that to participat varies of sports could make participater more strong and get more healthy and more standard life , this is original wish. We all konw that taking excise everyday will be out of wrong life, this thinking way in our life could tell the importance. The third reasons, but not the last one, is that what our do each day is allways sitting room alone a long hours, lacking communicating with real life person. we all require activties to adapt our life colour. participating in sports could give our life much more chance to improve our communicating and change our stationaray life. Above reasons could mirro my view of one should participate in sports not to fouce on the rewards, we should notice the process of sports.