文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;请注意分段。
Nowadays,studyiny English has become more and more popular. It is a commen phenomenon that many students always ignore the spelling.There are three reasons : the first,students develop a bad habit that learn English.Secondly,they may think it is important that acheive high score rather than spelling.Thirdly,a great many students so hard to finish a lot of homework that have no time to take more energy to do. Therefore,we must change this penomenon.as for me,keep a good hobit to study English spell.