恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;请注意分段。
Nowadays,studyiny English has become more and more popular. It is a common phenomenon that many students always neglect to learn English.There are three reasons : the first,students develop a bad habit that learn English.Secondly,they may think it is important that achieve high score rather than spelling.Thirdly,a great many students so hard to finish a lot of homework that have no time to take more energy to do. Therefore,we must change this phenomenon.as for me,we should Form a good habit of learning English.