2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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At the moment,our country is in the rapid development stage.People's living standard has also improved ay lot.But the society security didn't keep pace with the societ.Oppositely,we apparently felt the security is deteriorated in some places especially in those allededly tranquil areas. there are some reasons foe the present situation.First is the movement of population.People moved one place to another piace.Most of them have low culture level.This increase the difficulty of managing the group for local goverment.Second I think is the natural disaster like The earthquake in WengChuan. It resulted thousands of people died.Not only property security but also life security is confronted with threaten.Last is the economic developed imbanlance.The poor become more poor.So they only can resort on criming to continue their life. In order to solve these problems,I came out some solutions.The goverment should establish some effective rules ti standard the people floating and reduce the crime rate.The goverment should strenthen the surpervise and improve the quality of building.As individual,we should learn more security knowledge of how to protect ourselves and increase our prevention consciousness.Using our brilliant to fight against crimers.I believe with everyone's efforts,our world wiil become more safer.