托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；句式变化多样；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

There is a debate about participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something. Without any thinking of in no time, I am going to disagree this view of participating in sports. The following reasons could interpret my perspective. Firstly, to take part in all kinds of sports is not to achieve some ranks or rewards in the end. Conversely, achieving some rewards is just one of the possibilities, maybe this is lighter one, the most important target is to transmitting sports spirits crossing the world, enhancing the relationship with different peoples, which is keep the line in some problems during the development of different countries or nations such as environment protecting and resource reused . The second reason I could not keep the same view with the speaker is that to participate various of sports could make participator more strong and get more healthy, this is original wish. We all know that doing excise everyday will be out of wrong life style, this thinking way in our life could tell the importance. The third reasons, but not the last one, is that what our do each day is always sitting room alone long time, lacking communicating with real person. we all require activities participated to adapt our life. participating in sports could give our life much more chance to improve our communicating and change our life more healthy. Above reasons could mirror my view of one should participate in sports not to focus on the rewards, we should notice deeply the process of sports.