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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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At the moment,our country is in the rapid development stage.People's living standards has also improved a lot.But the society security didn't keep pace with the society.Oppositely,we apparently felt the security deteriorate in some places especially in those allegedly tranquil areas. There are some reasons for the present situation.First is the movement of the population.People moved one place to another place.Most of them have low culture level.This increase the difficulty of managing the group for local government.Second I think is the natural disaster like The earthquake in WengChuan. It resulted that thousands of people died.Not only property security but also life security are confronted with threaten.The last is the economic development is not balance.The poor become more poor.So they only can resort on criming to continue their life. In order to solve these problems,I came out some solutions.The government should establish some effective rules ti standard the people floating and reduce the crime rate.The government should strengthen the surpervise and improve the quality of building.As individual,we should learn more security knowledge of how to protect ourselves and increase our prevention consciousness.Using our brilliant to fight against crimers.I believe with everyone's efforts,our world wiil become more safer.
