拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮。
Nowadays,there are many students don't pay attention to spelling in their English learning.They spell English words in their own way,nevertheless they often wrong. The reason why the phenomenon that the wrong spelling arise is that,firstly,our students put more attention on stimulate of sentences but ignore the simplest but most significant thing about spelling.Secondly,our advanced facilities help us spell in the right way,but we cannot remember the right spelling,and we make the same mistake in the next time.Thirdly,our students think there are too many words in the dictionary that they couldn't accomplish spelling every word in the right way.That's not true,where there is a will there is a way.Although we couldn't spell every word right,we can spell the words that are often used in our life. To change the situation,I think,firstly,we should pay attention to our daily life when we see somethings we can think of their English spellings.Secondly,when we spell wrong one time,we should remember the right spelling in case that we mistake it next time.If we have a heart to do it,we can make it.