2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Nowadays,with the development of society and economy.Studying on line has become more and more popular.Different people have the different viwes about it.Some people hold the opinion that will have more effective on study by useing internet.Moreover,it bring more comfortable to us in our daily life. Howeve,the others don't think so.They think it is important for students to learn.Many of them are addicted in playing computer games online.fewer and fewer students take more energy to work and study. As far as I am concerned,we should take a correct attitud that using the internet.