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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；若增加一些长难句的使用，文章会更好；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。
Nowadays,With the development of society and economy.Studying on line has become more and more popular.Different people have the different viewes about it.Some people hold the opinion that will have more effective on study by using the internet.There are more efficient in learning English.Moreover,it brings more comfortable to us in our daily life. Howeve,the others don't think so.They think it is important for students to learn.Many of them are addicted to playing computer games online.Fewer and fewer students take more energy to work and study. As far as I am concerned,we should take a correct attitude that using the internet.
