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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2270
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,With the development of society and economy.Studying on line has become more and more popular.Different people have the different views about it.Some people hold the opinion that there are more efficient in learning English.Moreover,it brings more comfortable to us in our daily life. Howeve,the others don't think so.They think it is important for students to learn.Many of them are addicted to playing computer games online.Fewer and fewer students take more energy to work and study. As far as I am concerned,we should take a correct attitude that using the internet.

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