2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

作者词汇量积累不错，能较准确地使用学术词汇，单词拼写要仔细；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

The table aims at informing us that life expectancy is growing increasingly while infant morality is sharply reducing.The figure of life expectancy expands from nearly 40 years old to almost 60 years old during the 1960s to the 1990s.However,at that time,the rate of infant morality slipped from roughly 20% to 10%.To get a sense of how this phenomenon happened,we must turn first to causes for it,and the existence derives from a variety factors. Firstly,in the 1960s,shortage of provisions physically and mentally overwhelmed.To prevent this phonomenon from worsening,the whole nation concentrated to develop the production.Such is a human nature of desiring to survive.Eventually,as a case in point,the tendency is in lines with our wishes.Of course,dying of starving also get a breakthrough.Secondly,with technology enhancing at a fantasitic speed,some diseases which leading to die would have been cure.Pneumonia is a case to further illustrate.Fortunately for us today,people who are infected this chronic disease needn't despair.Most people take the position that technology,especially biotechnology,is uncomparable,to which I can not attach my consent. Certainly,the significance of technology can not be denied,but healthy lifestyle is essence of life expectancy.we shoul not put the incidental before the foundamental.The difference between life expectancy and infant morality expresses a brighter future is coming to us.