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Nowadays, more and more persons are crazy to take part in variety of certificate exams. The reasons why they intend to get various certificates are different. Someone intends to get a good job in the future, and some only intends to enrich themselves. As for me, all of their opinions are right. However, certificate doesn’t mean anything. Of course, one’s abilities can be verified by it, and it is easier for us to find a good job. Nevertheless, how we can perform in this aspect can’t only be indicated in the certificates but EQ and so on. Therefore, at the present time, more and more companies search for their workers only by their certificates, which is not comprehension, and I think it is one of the reasons why more and more persons are crazy to get certificate. We need something to verify our abilities, but isn’t only by certificate which doesn’t mean anything.
