2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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The Way to Success Abraham Lincoln has said that "If you give me six hours to chop down the tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening axe. " We all recognize the remark of Lincoln, however, how about his way to success. The way to success is extremely fateful. If you find it, it will support you to achieve success easier, otherwise will be more difficult. So, what is the way to success? First and foremost, you have to distribute your time reasonably . If you use your time reasonably, you can attain success more quickly than others whoever can't do it. Moreover, you should spend much more time in solving the most essential part of the problem. As you work out it, the rest isn't the problem. Last but not least, the hint from your heart, which is also called confidence. Someone has said that if you are confident, you might not win, but if you are unconfident, you have to be a loser. As it means, confidence is very essential. Success is not inaccessible for us, if you find the way to success. Even though, you are not famous, clever and so on, you can be triumphant.