2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

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The table aims at informing us that life expectancy is growing increasingly while morality rate is sharply reducing.The figure of life expectancy expands from nearly 40 years old to almost 60 years old during the 1960s to the 1990s.However,at that time,the rate of morality slipped from roughly 20% to 10%.To get a sense of how this phenomenon happened,we must turn first to causes for it,and the existence derives from a variety factors. Firstly,in the 1960s,shortage of provisions physically and mentally overwhelmed.To prevent this phenomenon from worsening,the whole nation concentrated developing the production.Such is a human nature of desiring to survive.Eventually,as a case in point,the tendency is rather satisfied,for the positive of it is just in lines with our wishes.Of course,dying of starving also get a breakthrough.Secondly,with technology enhancing at a fantastic speed,some diseases which causing death would have been remedy.Pneumonia is a case to further illustrate.Fortunately for us today,people who are infected this kind of disease needn't despair.Most people take the position that technology,especially biotechnology,is incomparable,to which I can not attach my consent. Certainly,the significance of technology can not be denied,but we can not ignore the most critical which called the tails wags the dogs.The difference between life expectancy and morality rate expresses a brighter future is coming to us.