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No one can failed to noticed the fact that student's mental health is a grave problem in the school.More and more serious thing has been happened recently .Actually,how to improve student's mental health is very important.Student's bad mental health is a severely affected their live and hinded the development of the education. A number of the factors could account for this problem.But above all,school has a lot of things to do about the student's mental health.First,it has opened the active about how to train the mental health in time.Secondly,school should enhanced thier awareness about the find the beauty of the social.What's more,the school should explod the flow of the social. In view of the seriousness of the problem,the student's should be taken the effective measures.First,it is essential that student's thireself should often go out to see the sight or take a active.Scendly,student's should enhanced their awareness of mental health.With this measures taken, the student's will bring light future,and the social wii become more and more better.