题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中学术词汇使用较丰富,但是拼写错误比较多;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
As the technology has been developing rapidly,computer play a more and more significent role in almost every field,such as the natural science,the social science,the life sciences and so on.Obviously,the steerly development of computer can help human save their time and energe,but some people concern that computer will think like man,and replace man totally in the future. As my view.computer woule never think like man.They are designed,programmed,and have no real life and independent thinking like man.So it is not terrible that “computer will think like man".But the worriable fact is that we human is used to rely on computers everywhere nowadays.We take advantage of computers in manual labour,shopping,education,meeting and so on.Someone worry about that we will think like computers. It is important for human to take the full use of computers without lose their active thinking and clear mind.