2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

China is a county of the most population in the world,so the pressure to everyone in China is huge.Even to the children,they are facing a huge competition in the future.Because of these reasons,which they should work hard for their future. A large population in a country,they are sure that the people in the country will have huge stress by every thing around them.Even for the kids.The parents in China all have the same opinion,which is "The kids can't lose at the start line,".So they send their children to art classes,all kinds of art classes,such as piano class,music class and so on,and each child has at least one art class.The parents think by these ways their kids can be more competitive,and when they grow up to an adult they can obtain a good job and make more money,who will have a good life in the future. Even though the thought of parents are not wrong,it is still has negative.In my opinion,I think the children should have wonderful childhood,and we should give them more time to play games with their friends,and whatever they want to.This is not a bad way to the children,and I think it will be a way to help them during their growing period.And by this way,then they will learn more useful things than go to the art classes.