4. 突然,一只巨大的蚂蚁向她飞快跑去,她很害怕,大声呼救但没人回答。最后她醒过来,原来只是一个梦。
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Hi Martin, Last week I read two articles from the book “Alice in Wonderland” in the English class and they are quite interesting. Isn't that interesting yesterday night,she saw Alice inside bed,want invite her go to wonderland. After arrived wonderland,these flowers is similar to preson,can sing and dacing,they say her to hello