2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章层次较为清晰。

At present,more and more shop sale things on excessive packaging.What lead to our life change. There are some reasons. At first,with the life quality enhance we became more particular about the packaging.What's more,every one like the good things,and excessive packaging can make the things look better. In my eyes, it's bad for our environment ,and also wast.I suggest the government should take some measure to improve the phenomena and the citizen should do their best to rule themselves. Only in this way can we come to a better tomorrow.