Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
At 6:00 clocks in the morning,the music blasted forth and woke me,I got up.But in the winter,it was difficult for me to get up early,because it was so cold.I brushed my hair and teeth quickly,when it was 6:30 clocks,I did morning exercises in the football field. About 7:00 am,I started having breakfast,I ate gruel and manta as usual.Then I went to the classroom,it took me twenty minutes to arrive.On the way to the classroom,I always talk with my classmates and we sing songs together,it was fun and we were happy.After the class end,I had lunch,then I continued my class. At 6:00 clocks in the afternoon,I had dinner.After dinner,I took the last class.It was about 8:30 pm that I finished all the classes,and then I went to dormitory,I was tired.Usually,I did my homework first and after doing my homework,I listened to classical music to relax. When it was 11:00 clocks in the night,the light was turned off,it was time to sleep,so I went to bed and slept.A day end but a new day will come tomorrow,I am looking forward to.