2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Nowadays,more and more excessive packaging on market.wherever we buy the things or whatever ,and we can see the package.when you have to chose one thing without package is very difficult to you.so in this situation, the best we can do may be is to chose the one which almost looks simple. Why this happen in our society?it is must have the reason,on the one hand,maybe because more and more people pay more attention on the appearence,on the other hand,the producter chose this way to promote their productor. In my opinion,tthat can cause the west of the resource.