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2005年1月英语六级作文真题:对病人进行捐助

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:09浏览次数:776
要求:

希望社会对这个病人进行捐助,这个病人是个学生

 1.对病人的简单介绍:目前的病情和家庭情况 

 2.目前的困难:无法继续承担医疗费用,需要护理 
 3.希望捐助,联系方式 
用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Nowadays,the problem of piracy has become more and more serious. Books,tapes,VCDs and others high-tech products have been pirated. For instance,when a new product comes onto market,most probably,its pirated counterpart will soon put on its appearance in the market,too. Piracy has caused a great loss to legitimate producers,inventors and writers in many ways. To start with,the pirated products often cost much less than the genuine ones so that they enjoy a better trading position in spite of their relatively poor quality. The genuine products,on the contrary,sell poorly. What's worse,pirated books sometimes do great harm to the authors'reputation due to some misprints. In the long run,pirated products may have a negative impact on customers. Those legitimate producers'creativity and enthusiasm may be deeply hurt by the fact that some customers are more interested in the pirated products for the sake of small gains. In my opinion,it's high time that everyone started the battle against piracy.First,customers should develop their consciousness to resist the pirated products. Second,the government should take effective measures to put an end to piracy. Finally,laws must be strictly enforced to completely ban piracy. Only in this way can we wipe the pirated products out of our life.

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