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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that they prefer enjoying western festivals,such as the coming X'mas.There is a general discussion today about this issue.Certainly,this is a sign of diversity in the life. A lot of reasons are responsible for it.To begin with,the young men are exposed to the international trends,and they are partly influenced.What's more,the western views have been widespreaded naturally and culturally.Moreover,nowadays people have their rights to have a taste of various cultures.In other words,they may celebrate festivals they like besides the conventional days,like the Spring Festival. Obviously,this does some effects in our life.For example,it will arouse anxiety among called protectors of tradition.They unnecessarily worries that the western days are to replace the Chinese convention.Personally speaking,the policy of “let it be” will do more good that harm in this field.However,it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the negative effects of both traditional and western days.

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