2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As is shown in the graph ,education plays an important role in earning.The number of less that high school diploma is 14.1percent,which higher that the average of 7.6 percent .But those who have less education have litter weekly earning.Compared the person have short degeen ,their earning is more that ...this chart provides several important points of comparison between two trends