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2001年考研英语作文真题:希望工程

发布时间:2013-05-20 18:40浏览次数:2178
要求:
Directions:
  Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to
  1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,
  2) give a specific example, and
  3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. 
  You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
 本文中的图画非常简单,结合提示考生很容易理解其含义,但这张图片的意义却很深远:油灯上面的火焰是一个孩子的微笑,在黑暗中发出明亮的光芒,上面还有一句提示语“爱心是一盏灯,在越黑暗的地方越明亮。”这句话的理解关系到对整篇文章中心思想的正确理解。这句话的前半句是个比喻,后半句是一个越……越……的结构,考生应该深刻领会爱心的重要作用。本文中的提纲有三点,一是写出对于图画象征意义的理解,二是举出一个具体的事例,三是就献爱心的最好办法给出建议。另外这道题目中增加了情景语言,即:包括情景说明,提纲说明,以及图画。降低了题目的难度,考生可以结合提纲式作文、规定情景作文和图画作文的写作特点完成本文的写作。但要注意一个重要原则:英语情景说明语句,不可直接照搬,需要进行改动。尽量应用同义,近义词,相关表达,不同句式改造。例如worthy 可以替换为valuable,feelings 可以替换为 emotions,mankind 可以替换为 human being,noblest可以替换为greatest等。我们可分三段来完成本文。在第一段中不仅应描述图画,还应描述上面的那句话。在第二段中,应举一个能与图画所表达的道理相匹配的典型事例。这样的事例很多,考生可以结合自己的经历列举,如希望工程、抗洪捐款等等,也可以列举具体人物。最后一段中,考生可以提出自己的建议,这一部分难度不高,考生可以套用一些模版句型。
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;从句数量偏少;文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒。

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In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above graphs,we can observe tangibly that its reveal the average grades achieved each year in a four-year modern languages degree program by students at a British university together with their average final results.In both graphs,values refer to the decade from 1991 to 2000. Apparently,figure 1 compares examination scores in French,German and Spanish for each of the four years of the degree program.Although the scores were quite dissimilar in year one,with a difference of over 25% between the highest and the lowest marks,these had more or less converged by year three,with only a 15% different reappearing between the highest and lowest grades in year four. Obviously,figure 2 shows that nearly 60% of modern language students obtained either an upper second or a lower second class degree,while a further 20% were awarded a pass degree.Only 14% gained a first class degree and 9% actually failed the course.No comparisons can be made in this case between individual languages. In short,we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that there was a dramatic rise in marks for Spanish thoughout the four-year course,a less dramatic fall in marks for French,which where nevertheless the best for the period taken as a whole,whereas those for German showed very little change.Most students achieved second-class degrees.

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